Hi bloggers.My class was learning how to do a piece of writing using our senses and we had to writing about a photo on the TV. I found it challenging to use all of my senses and write all of my senses but anyway have a look at my writing see you later have a great day bye.
As I go for a swim in the sky-blue ocean I see the tall swaying palm trees making fresh wind as I hear the whistling soft wind and the soft waves.
As the hot sun blazes on my back, the cool fresh ocean water laps over on my feet. Slowly, I dive in for a swim and the soft breeze touches my face.
I taste the fresh hairy coconuts from the emerald green palm tree that sits on the small island. I drive on the cloud white boat and I can see the soft waves and clear blue water
Bye have a great day.
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