Hi bloggers. In my class we were learning how to write a descriptive piece of writing and we did a "My bedroom" piece writing of what you think about our bedrooms, I hope you like my writing .
My boring bedroom
I don't like my bedroom because it's plain white. I have to share my
room with my brother ( Jack). He smells like a boy so my whole room
smells I have no toys or Games in my room
My room is like a square mess
There's lots of stuff under the beds. Me and Jack have a bunk bed. I am on the top. It is very annoying. Jack and I have a ps4. Jack screams at the TV all night long till 3:00am. But the bed's are the best part in the room in my opinion.
The bed is the agent's wall and it has a lot of fluffy blankets on my bed. I try to clean my room but in one day it goes messy again.
Overall I really do NOT like my room except my ps4 bed and keyboard.
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